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FanFiction Jeremiah // Dreams

Titel: Dreams
Character: Mr. Smith / an unknown woman
Worte: 261 Worte
A/N: Following "

revised story: January 2016

It was dark when he did wake up, too dark to see anything, but he could feel it. She was there, in his room, in his bed. He could smell her, he could feel her. Her hands were gliding over his chest caressingly.

"You shouldn't do this," he tried to protest.

Then he felt her lips on his own. So warm and sweet and soft. And he gave in. At least tonight he wouldn't be alone.


He opened his eyes when he heard her opening the door. She tried to sneak away even without a goodbye.
"What are you going to do now," he held her back.

She turned round.
"Don't worry, I won't go back to the bar. I won't sell my body ... my soul ... again. Erin is very nice to me, she says, she knows a small town where they need good people for a new start. I guess I will give it a try."

He hesitated.
"You could stay here."

She smiled.
"That's not a good idea, Smith. And you know that."

Yes, he knew it. This night had been like a dream for both of them. But now life had to go on. He wished, it would be different, but it couldn't be.

"I'm so sorry," he whispered.

"But there is no need for it."
She bent over him and kissed him one last time.
"Tonight you've given me back my life. I didn't know that there is still so much warmth and tenderness in this world. Thank you, Smith, for reminding me."

++the end++

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"Ich habe nicht gewußt, das es in dieser Welt noch so viel Wärme und Zärtlichkeit geben kann. Und ich werde es nie wieder vergessen!"

Sooooo schön kann träumen sein .... *seufz*
Bittersüß und traurig gleichermaßen...

Danke meine Süße! Das hast du toll gemacht!


Ich liebe den Gedanken, das sie eigentlich "nur" zu Smith gegangen ist um sich auf ihre Art bei ihm zu bedanken - und das er ihr auf seine Art gezeigt hat, das alles ein Geben und Nehmen ist. Ich glaube, das beide etwas aus dieser Nacht mitgenommen haben ...

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Thank you!
Yes, I think, both have needed a night like this. Their life is often so hard to endure ...

I'm so glad she was able to give Smith one night of love and comfort. They both need it so much.


Yes, she gives him a night of comfort and warmth - and he gives it back to her. They both deserve it!

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