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prisca1960

FanFiction // Jeremiah // Sex or love

Title: Sex or love
Fandom: Jeremiah / Mr. Smith
Words: 206
Disclaimer: of course, not mine

Revised work: January 2016

"Why’d you do that?"
Kurdy eyes his friend curious. The young woman who left their table was pretty and she looked disappointed.
"She offered you a night together with her."

Smith smiled softly. "I know. But I like her."

Kurdy sighed. “Smith, I’ll never be able to understand what's going on in your mind."

"It would only hurt her. She doesn’t want sex, she wants love."

Smith thought back of another young woman, Anna Rose, he had loved once. That had been only for one night, too. A night full of nearness and tenderness, full of trust, full of hope. A night full of sadness and happiness at the same time. A special night with a very special woman.

But he hadn't been able to hold her back. She was long gone. She was dead. He thought of Kurdy and Elizabeth, he thought of Jeremiah and Libby, he thought of Marcus and Meaghan. No, this world was not a place for love anymore. Love always ended with loss and pain.

This was why he had sent her away. No love anymore! Sex ... sex was okay. Then he could try to forget at least for some stolen moments. But no feelings anymore! It was much too hurtful.

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So sad ... but so true in their narrative world - Love is not easy to find, nor keep! Thank you for this!

Thank you for reading!

Love is never easy to find and to keep - but in his time it seems especially hard.

It's so sad to think that love just means pain and loss to Smith. He deserves so much love.

I will never give up the hope: one day also he will find the love!

This is sooo sad. Belle said it perfectly "he deserves so much love"
Thank you, sweetie, for this brilliant little story.

Yes, he is so lonesome and so full of fear, but maybe one day he'll find the courage to fall in love again! I hope so!

This is achingly gorgeous. And I love how you fill in some gaps about his daughter's mother. Beautifully done.

I love to think about Rose' mother. Some time ago I've written a longer story about Smith's past (it's only in german). This was the beginning of Anna-Rose and her story - sometimes she is so real for me like Smith or Kurdy ...

Oooh, your longer story sounds amazing! I hope you have plans to post an English version someday. I really like your vision of Smith. Thanks for sharing this story with us!

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