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FanFiction - Jeremiah (TV) - Stand up


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Another re-post of a comment_fic - Jeremiah again. I hope you will like.
Title: Stand up
Fandom: Jeremiah (TV)
Characters: Mr. Smith, Jeremiah
Rating: R
Word Count: 336  words
Disclaimer: Of course, I don't own Jeremiah nor the characters :( - I'm just borrowing them for a while

Prompt: Lyrics = any, any
Without you
The earth turns
The sun burns
But I die without you




"It's time to get up," Smith said.
"There is still a lot to do."

Jeremiah stared at him with bloodshot eyes. It was a week now, that Smith had killed Libby. The woman he had loved more than anyone else; the woman who had not only betrayed him but everyone in the Mountain. For a week he had been blind with rage, he had smashed everything in the room he had shared with Libby, had even lashed out at Kurdy, who had been his partner, his friend for such a long time. Finally he was broken down, paralyzed with grief and despair. Now all his energy was used up, he couldn't even hate Smith anymore.

"What's all that in aid off," he murmured.
"The sun still burns and the earth still turns. And all I can think about is that you better should have killed me, too. Without her my life is worth nothing anymore."

Smith slowly shook his head.
"If I had had the choice, Jeremiah, I would have given my life for hers. But God doesn't ask about our wishes.

He says: It's time to get up! You should better listen to him."

"That's downright bullshit," Jeremiah snarled.

"I don't agree with him often," Smith said, a sad smile on his lips.
"But he is right this time. Libby was just a small cog in the big picture. Before she met you she was alone, and scared; it was easy for Daniel to manipulate her. His thoughts were engraved into her mind. She wanted a new life together with you, but it was too late."

He sighed slightly.
"She was not the only one, Jeremiah, Daniel gathers people like her around him and he gains force with every day. The day will come, soon enough, the final combat. And you should stand at Marcus's side when it happens, together with me.

For Libby! Because I may have shot her in the church, but he is the one who already killed her a long time ago."

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I like this. Smith is right and Jeremiah going to heal.

It is hard, but not only for Jeremiah. The world they are living into takes a lot from everyone. But you are right: there is hope that Jeremiah will heal.

Great wisdom from Smith. Daniel killed Libby long before that bullet finished her. Poor Jeremiah.

It hard not only for Jeremiah; Smith knows that there was no other way but his heart is crying. It's a difficult world they are forced to live into.

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